Discuter:Révoltes et utopies : la contre-culture américaine des années soixante

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	* The paragraph '''religion ''' was misleading as such : Those three / four religions were not adopted by everybody, and reducing a religion to the vegetarian issue is unclear and clumsy.		* The paragraph '''religion ''' was misleading as such : Those three / four religions were not adopted by everybody, and reducing a religion to the vegetarian issue is unclear and clumsy.
-	* '''Populations / migrations change''' : those numbers are unsourced. Where do they come from and what do they describe ?	+	* '''Populations / migrations change''' : those numbers are unsourced. Where do they come from and what do they describe ? You mean Population growth...not population change. Demographic change is not reduced to quantitative changes.
	* In the paragraph '''music''', the headings need reworking because zeitgeist is not a fit title, all the songs, groups you mention later whatever the groupings belong to the zeitgeist of the time so...		* In the paragraph '''music''', the headings need reworking because zeitgeist is not a fit title, all the songs, groups you mention later whatever the groupings belong to the zeitgeist of the time so...

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• The paragraph religion was misleading as such : Those three / four religions were not adopted by everybody, and reducing a religion to the vegetarian issue is unclear and clumsy.

• Populations / migrations change : those numbers are unsourced. Where do they come from and what do they describe ? You mean Population growth...not population change. Demographic change is not reduced to quantitative changes.
• In the paragraph music, the headings need reworking because zeitgeist is not a fit title, all the songs, groups you mention later whatever the groupings belong to the zeitgeist of the time so...